You paint Clark's insecurities well, and quite poetically. I'm interested where you are going with this, as I'm unsure how his guilt will play out-- unless it's to leave Lois for a while?? peep But I'm definitely intrigued! Hope to read more soon!

Reach for the moon, for even if you fail, you'll still land among the stars... and who knows? Maybe you'll meet Superman along the way. wink