Thank you, everyone, for all the wonderful comments! Warms my heart like no words can describe!
Gotta say, after countless re-readings, that Hokey Pokey line is definitely one of my favorites, too!
As for whether or not to continue... the muse is having a hard time letting this one go, but she keeps changing her mind on the direction, so it may be a bit yet... I've got a good start, tho, so long as she doesn't change her mind on that again, lol!
Again, thanks for the awesome Feedback! As always, it is truly inspiring!