I found the epilogue sweet and delightful.
You did a great job wrapping up a lot of loose ends -- ones I'd even forgotten about, like James going to see his parents (and maybe even someday being transformed back by love
) and giving both Catherine and Dan a happy ending. Jumping that far into the future was a nice touch, showing us that they are still happy and have brought peace and happiness to the reunited kingdom.
I've already given you my constructive criticism in the last feedback thread, so I'll just take this opportunity to thank you for all the time you spent on researching and writing this story, and especially for sharing it with us. I'm not sure what I'm going to do now that I won't have a new chapter to look forward to every day! I'll really miss watching this delightful tale unfold.
Kathy
