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Michael-- Yeah, Loisette never gets to see Catherine again. frown But you'll learn a bit about what happened to Catherine in the epilogue, if that helps.

As noted by Kathy, Clarkent did indeed have his seventeenth birthday.

As for the title of the next part, well... laugh


Kathy-- I've kept all the important coming-of-age sort of stuff (including marriage) at seventeen years of age. So, when she's 17, she'll be of marrying age. My usage of 17 was sort of a compromise between the more modern 18 and the younger medieval ages.

Yeah, I imagine neighbors have to mete out some justice from time to time. smile

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*Groan* Now I keep picturing Peri with mouse ears and a pointy hat.
Pwahahaha. Good! Then I've done my job. wink


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