tooaddicted2tv-- I am sorry to hear I lost you for a bit, but I am glad you liked it anyway! As for the age jump issue, starting with chapter 11, where Clarkent is 14, a year will pass every 2-4 chapters (for instance, Clarkent will be sixteen in Chapter 16) until we hit a certain crucial point where a lot of stuff happens. I hope that helps answer your question!
Iolanthe-- Guess those secret identities have a lot of ups and downs, huh?
Kathy-- Glad you liked the race as an icebreaker for Loisette and Catherine. I hope you like the way things go!
Michael-- Your feedback is always rather amusing, heh. I am glad you think Catherine and Loisette are fun together--I was always sad how Cat was removed from the series, as she offered some good conflict. As for your plot comments, well, I think this is the part where I smile mysteriously and say nothing.
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Thanks for the feedback, folks!
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