Wow! Very intense... just curious--do you have a psychology background? Cause you write like you know what you are talking about. wink

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“No,” She cried out as she built the walls, only to have them collapse. Time and again she tried, and time and again, she failed. Her intense emotional response began to feedback on itself and she began to lose awareness of her surroundings.

“No, No,” she held up her hands defensively against the man in front of her. “I’m sorry, I’m sorry,” and she began to beg with him in his native alien language for forgiveness.

Suddenly there was silence in her mind. She waited long and terrified moments for further reprisal.
OMG this ending... so intense! Lois is so strong and to see her cower like that has got to be breaking (both) Clark's heart! frown

Please post more soon!

Reach for the moon, for even if you fail, you'll still land among the stars... and who knows? Maybe you'll meet Superman along the way. wink