“They are? That’s more than this article tells me. Some woman ‘believes’ something may have been slipped into her drink. The other woman can’t tell us anything because she’s dead. Sorry, Lane. This is my call. And I say no. I’m not going to start a panic on campus without solid proof.”
Well done. I wondered why Clark was letting her get away with such vague language.
If she re-writes the article with the facts it will be much more powerful.
I assume you will have her try to peddle this story to Perry at the Planet and have him drag out the details about the GHB?
Or do you plan to have Paul call the source quoted, the Metropolis coroner, James Seymour, and find out it is GHB and print his own article?
Paul is right saying "believes" is way too vague. However I can see him finding out about Lois from the coroner and including her as another victim, name withheld to protect her privacy, then running his article in the school paper.
