Aw, I really liked your start to this story. I'm a sucker for this point in their relationship ("Church of Metropolis" is my favorite episode of the whole series). It's just such fun to watch Lois gradually realizing that this partner and best friend of hers may very well be the love of her life and the person she can't imagine not having in her life.
Congrats on posting your first fanfic! I do remember those first anxious moments (vaguely... it was a while ago, haha) but rest assured that you have a really nice start here. Looking forward to your next part and watching Lois and Clark's relationship blossom.
Tracey
