Nan, how can this possibly be 12 of 12? There has to be more to this!
Okay, so there's an epilogue but still. With this:
He settled gracefully down onto the balcony and lifted her effortlessly in his arms. "Someday you're going to have to explain why I was able to do without your help for so long."
"I can't figure it out either," Lois said
and this:
His shoulder was looking more and more tempting by the second. After a few second's deliberation, she rested her head against the smudged blue spandex and closed her eyes.
right at the end of this part, how can there only be an epilogue left?
Please make it a
BIG one or if not, can it be one that serves as a transition to the next major part of the story?
Bob
