I loved the name Benny Bonebreak.


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Of course he looks good. When doesn’t he?
Oh, yeah, he always looks good, doesn’t he?


I love how you managed to come so close to a revelation without actually doing it - you almost had me worried that there was going to be a revelation when Saskia didn’t want one! And it was great the way you had them both totally misunderstanding the other.


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“Don’t ever call me ‘baby’ again.”
I’m suddenly reminded of one of Sue’s (very hot) fics.

Great story!!

~~Even heroes have the right to dream.~~