Thanks, Gerry. I've received private responses from Methwin and CC Aiken that reminded me that the way I phrased the feedback request indicated that I did not want comments here. I've changed that in the story.

Yest, feedback is welcome on the boards as well as privately.

And thank you Methwin and CC for responding privately!

smile Jude

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