Thanks for your comments, Irene, Jose, CC, Vicki, Maria, Anna, Ingra, Tricia, Merry, and Laura! I really appreciate all of your comments! Thank you so much to everyone that thought the tension was good -- I worked really hard to try to make it as believable as I could smile .

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The tension in this section was very well written. And you're right not to have Lois accept a hasty apology and have the problem blow over in an instant.
Thank you! I thought the hasty appology wouldn't let them get everything out in the open and the pain would fester and get worse until Lois explodes.

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Great Part, but no Penny. I really want to know what she is up to
Don't worry, you'll see her soon wink . She's been busy!


The next part will be posted shortly smile I have 2 exams this week and the class I'm teaching has an exam, so it's going to be a crazy week for me razz

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Laura "The Yellow Dart" U. (Alicia U. on the archive)

"A hero is an ordinary individual who finds the strength to persevere and endure in spite of overwhelming obstacles." -- Christopher Reeve