Lynn,
Loved the story (and the epilogue.) Congratulations. I agree with many above that skipping to the end of the next day was a terrific plot move in part 3. The best moment in 3 for me was Clark's pressing of lois about why she hadn't slept with Dan and then his telling her he hadn't slept with Mayson.
“I didn’t sleep with Mayson last night,” he repeated softly, handing the trophy to her at last. “It’s why she left this morning.”
"Handing her the trophy" was a fabulous image.
I liked the epilogue too, as I had wanted to know more about what happened between Mayson and Clark. I still would love to see you write the scene (or scenes) when Clark tells Lois about Superman. Afterall, they're still stuck in that cabin and need to call him in at some point to get them home. Please
All in all, thanks for the treat of a very enjoyable story!
Martha
