Jaxie,
This is moving along so nicely. I adored your description of Jimmy's apartment! In all of my fanfic reading, I don't think I've ever come across one this greatly detailed, and so perfectly "Jimmy."
Also, so glad to hear him call her Linda so we can get the air cleared.
Your writing, as always, is great on action and really rich on detail. I'm ready to hear what comes next!
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