At first I thought that you went through the A-plot awfully fast, given how you set this story up to be centered around it. And then you dropped all that stuff on us. And kept piling it up. And up. And up. And now this mess almost has a Carol'esque quality to it dizzy

The others are right. Get back here. Now.

Michael

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