Back again. Still reading even if I can't find the time to drop by and leave some FDK.
This story is simply lovely. The sections are short, but since it's an everyday story, you always tomorrow to look forward to (more so today
with only one part to go). I love it when you get Lois and Clark all waffy. From all the universes you've created in the last months, I think this is probably my favourite.
The story leaves though a couple of questions: how much of these Lanes is because of Clark? Has he made that much of a difference in their lives or did you pictured them simply different from the ones in the show? Will it come to the point where Lois's insecurities about relationships become an issue they discuss and will Clark use the Kents as an example, that not every couple breaks up?
One last thought: Lois, just go and bunk with him in Metropolis!
