I just caught up with the last few parts of this story today. You know, when it started, I thought it was just going to be a fun little romp, but you've got me totally hooked on the plot now! I like the interplay between Lois and Clark -- not instant soul mates, but intrigued and friendly -- and it's fun to keep stumbling across all the things that are "backwards".
I especially liked Sam being an expert on Clark's physiology. Of course he is! That's awesome.
One minor edit, for when you get it ready for the archive -- you have Lois say that Josh has a few cracked ribs, yet a few paragraphs later, Clark notes that he doesn't. Since Clark doesn't have his powers to check/contradict Lois's evaluation, I'd think you'd want to remove one of the two references.
This is fun, Carol. Keep 'em coming.
