I read through this story all in one shot so i think i will just comment on the whole thing all at once. First i would like to say that it was definitely an enjoyable story and that "what if" type stories tend to be my favorite kinds. I do remember vaguely thinking of red kryptonite when i read about the dream catcher way back in the beginning of the story, but i really didn't connect it up at all. I thought that your choice of kind of stockpiling all the non superman essential plots from season one (and one from season two) into the story was interesting to say the least. Overall i thought you really shone in the Waffy aspects of the story
