Great start for this sequel. Can't wait to see how you resolve things.
I love the progression of Lois pre-Clark to post-Clark. Although Lois is still Lois, 10 year prior or later, the influence of Clark is so apparent, that going back to who she once was, is like becoming another person. If Lois confesses that she and Clark are indeed married, I wonder what that will do to the future...I'm sure you'll figure something interesting out.
