Coming out of lurk mode here ... could someone write a bona fide Clark and Lois love story, please?
I've borne with this story a long time, because I think you have talent. I have to say, though, that I'm at last getting a bit tired of this Clark paired with Lana thing that you have going on in both this story and the last one.
I'm sorry, but I don't like to read about Clark and Lois paired up with other people even if the trouble is temporary. I do hope that if/ when you archive this series that you add a warning to the description like Clark/OC or Clark/Lana so that readers will know what to expect.
In the meantime, I don't know if I have the stomach to read another Clark paired with Lana story ... although at least they remember each other here. But you do like to manipulate your readers! I'm reserving judgment for now.
