I love the section with Rachel and CJ. It provides a lot of insight into where he’s coming from. I actually love the idea that he’s very much Clark’s opposite.
I loved this:
Lois backed into Clark, “What... what *are* you?”
<I’m your new boyfriend’s twin...>
And this:
He turned to leave, quickly followed by Clark. Neither was aware of Lois’ close scrutiny as she trailed behind them.
was *VERY* interesting. I don’t think Lois is going to be fooled for two years!
Bob
