Thank you all so much for the kind comments.
I wanted to see Clark do something just a little more forward but still try to stay true to where he was at mid-season-two. I believe that all things considered, he really would have tried to talk to Lois right then. I worked hard to capture Lois and Clark where they were at this time. Clark was easy but Lois was more difficult. My impression was that she REALLY didn’t want to talk any more that night.
Based on where I perceive Clark to be, I just couldn’t see him sharing the big secret with Lois under these circumstances. I believe that this Clark (mid/late season 2) had to know (I mean KNOW!) that Lois was committed to him as Clark before he could admit to being Superman.
Originally I had planned to stop right when Clark walks away from her door. But I think I have too much invested in this situation to walk away now. So, what I want to know is:
What will Lois think/feel/do in the morning?
What is Clark going to do about the Superman secret?
At this point, your guess is as good as mine. I really don’t know what will happen. Will Lois get scared again? Will Clark feel secure enough to tell Lois the Superman secret? What about the rest of the Lucky Leon plot? I have no idea! (Really, I don’t!) However, when I find out, I’m certain that a sequel will appear. (Whatever does happen, I suspect it will be WAFFy.
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Again, thank you all for the feedback. I had a LOT of fun bringing forward this story.
Bob
