This inquiring newbie wants to know- how lame is it to respond to your own fanfic challenge?
Not much, I hope, for I've done it too
As for FDK:
I have to admit it confused me a bit. I didn't quite understood what happened in Mayson's office, and I was really not in the mood to use a dictionary. If I got it right, a cat destroyed Mayson's research or something?
I liked what happened when the situation was unspooled though.
He held her close, ignoring Mayson’s sputtered questions and exclamations.
“Is it contagious?!”
That was one of them.
“Should I call…a shrink?”
That was another.
“Poisonous gas?”
Still more, and he really couldn’t blame her.
“Do you have to hold her so close?”
That last one a little bitter sounding.
LOL! I liked this point a lot.
Anyway, I'll see ya.
AnnaBtG.
