*sigh*
At least there was no Mayson. That's about all I can say for it...
Other than that - there's Dan smoochies *shudder*. And no word on what Jimmy may or may not have told Perry. And Dan's not dead. *sigh* And Clark won't die. So that's not a really cliffhanger because then Martha and Jonathan would have *really* freaked out when he and Lois showed up. And so would the Planet staff. They would have had a hoe down shin dig when Clark died, even if Lois had been in jeopardy.
*narrows eyes* Does this mean that Dan saves the day?!?!? No!
I did see someone else mention that TF didn't happen here. But if there's no Superman, there's no need for Tempus to destroy him, but the idea that maybe someone else managed to screw up the past is an interesting one.
That said... if you want to send the file to that special ML FIC box, I'd be more than happy to help you edit it.
Carol [who hasn't bothered to check and see how long she thinks this is going to be yet, but who thinks ML should post again, like now]