One question though: How could Luthor forget about a marriage license? Or was it on purpose on his part. As in as long as Lois doesn't know and he ships her off to the alps, no harm's done.
Or had he thought he was above the law? Or had he delegated the task to someone who deliberately dropped the ball...?
More points for the rewrite.
I had originally considered having the marriage be legal but unconsummated, allowing Lois to get an annulment if she wanted. But I didn't want to write another entire story on Lois being in charge of the Luthor fortune. Other writers have covered that and have done an excellent job.
Any other loose ends?
