Nice part. I liked the way you used Clark's POV to help us see how confused he really is.
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I enjoyed the way you got the Kents out of the way, leaving it to Lois & Clark to muddle through.
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I will nitpick on the call to Henderson and the Police response.
An area like suicide slums is simply too large for Henderson to even consider a search without more detail.
A reporter like Lois would have included her location no matter how shaken up she is.
I'd suggest that when you ready it for the archive you have Lois give Henderson her location and the direction Clark came from and tried to get her to return to. This would still leave a huge area for someone to search and allow for whatever time and confusion you need in the tale.
