Very nice, Alisha. I liked the part where Superman just sauntered in to talk to Lois because she wasn't in immediate danger and was halfway out of the ropes anyway. And I think the ending was perfect!

"Lo-is, you got some 'splainin' to do!"

"Clarkie, it wasn't my fault! Honest!"

(As long as he doesn't call her Miss Goodbottom.)

I don't think anything any of us could write would be better than just leaving it like that. Excellent all the way through.


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- Stephen King, from On Writing