Looking forward to Lois and Clark meeting. Heh, Lois is in for a shock thinking nothing's going to surprise her more... Yay! Clark's getting to know Superman.
Just a nitpick... typo?
It was funny; she’d slept on the ground many times and had less pain than one night back at home in Metropolis. She’d assume that it was old age, but at twenty six she should still be too young to have much pain.
By the way, thanks for clearing up the age difference, there's hope despite Clark's time-jumping from 1993 to 2008 in this alternate universe.
