Great story, Shayne. Now stop reading the feedback and give us the next part!
Kidding again. I like how Lois is boring in on the center of the story. And I personally think that Clark's use of his powers to win the scratch-off games is fine. He's not taking that money away from anyone else, and there's no guarantee that those cards would have come up a winner for another person who bought them. Besides, he's doing this so he can get two hundred other people home to their families. He's not trying to get rich.
I wonder if the person in Lois's apartment is still breathing. It couldn't be Clark, because the only hint of Lois Lane he might have at this point is something he might have glimpsed in a comic book or strip, or maybe on the back of a DVD set of TV episodes.
Seriously, you've spoiled us. I'd really like to read the next part!
