Hi, all!
Thanks for all the wonderful feedback.
I didn't think it'd go over this well.
Part two is already written. I tried to submit it as a sequel while part one was in cue(sp?) and LabRat told me that the archives don't take stories in chunks. I'll post part2 ASAP.
Tank, you weren't the only one confused about the time period. I showed the story to my Dad, and he assumed it was in the 20th century (because Supes was invented in 1938).
Yes, it's intended as 1800's.
Thanks again for the feedback. (I assume FDK is the proper abreviation?) I'm glad y'all like it.
