I.love.that.Kaylie. Period.
I can't wait to have her fess up.
Loved this part. Loved the I-love-you's. Loved Ellie (she did inherit that babble gene, didn't she?). Loved Kaylie's realization that she wanted to tell Jor her secret.
I don't know how he'll react to that. But I bet you'll show us with your wonderful writing, right? And soon? Please?
~Sira.