Wow! This was really great! Bossy Ellen (good choice to use the season 3 version...I barely register the season 1 version) was written very in character. The tension within Clark was palpable...trying to be a good person even though he regrets having to do it. The silent communication between the two was wonderful, but ultimately, I'm happy that Lois makes the choice to jump into the elevator, making the first bold move. Then Clark shows his own level of maturity in sharing his secret. I really enjoyed this story. Fabulous! thumbsup


You can find my stories as Groobie on the nfic archives and Susan Young on the gfic archives. In other words, you know me as Groobie. wink