I thought I missed something with the whole 3 years of marriage thing. We all know Clark wouldn't have lasted that long.
I actually liked this story. I get really excited when there's a story out of the norm. That's what we're here for, right? There are so many possiblities that its a shame to shoot down something that appears to be a little different.
But regardless of the subject matter, this piece was so powerfully written. I was immediately sucked in by Clark's emotions. It seemed almost real. I agree that this is a nice stand alone story. I'd love to see more from you!
~Kristen