I'm in awe too - and I want to know what you're feeding that Muse to make her so unflaggingly energetic (and can I have some?).
An intriguing start to what looks to be shaping up to be a fun rewrite, Nan. Keep it coming!
LabRat
Athos: If you'd told us what you were doing, we might have been able to plan this properly. Aramis: Yes, sorry. Athos: No, no, by all means, let's keep things suicidal.