Yay for chapter 17! I was nearly late to work this morning because I was trying to read quickly. But I couldn't make it all. I loved Lois' struggle to change him into his Superman outfit. I bet that'd actually be pretty tough to do. Anyway, I'm going to start commenting as I read from about the second half of the chapter.
“Sorry,” she mumbled as she started to pull away from him. “You were tossing in your sleep and I was afraid you were going to pull your IV out. As long as I was touching you, you seemed to calm down. I was just going to lay by you until you fell asleep but...” She paused in her explanation when he reached out and put one arm around her, holding her in place.
“Don’t apologize.”
Aww, I love how he calmed down when she touched him, even in his sleep.
It's too cute.
Clark’s... uh...” She glanced back at Clark who was hiding off to one side, clothed in his super hero outfit, “...getting dressed.”
The astonished looks on the two boys’ faces brought a flush into hers.
I'd love to see their faces.
What she wouldn’t give to be a fly on the wall right now.
Me too!
Wonderful job on this one. Lois and Clark were so perfectly in character and particularily adorable in this part.
Laura
