Sorry I have almost no time to comment, but I absolutely loved this part! I just love seeing this Lois, who is nowhere near the bitch she was in first season LnC. She spoke as contemptuously to Clark here as she did in the pilot, but in your story she did it only to keep up appearances - and she explained it to Clark, too.
I just
loved the sensual, erotic way you wrote Lois's fantasies about Clark, and the ever stronger attraction she felt for him.
I also
loved the fact that Lois saw through Clark's Superman disguise straight away. And I was intrigued by the fact that Clark acted as if Lois didn't know.
Well, wow! I
love the way you've set this story up. I'm very much looking forward to more!
Ann
