Well, I just read this in its entirety and have one thing to say:
WOW!!!!!!!!!!
This was great. Sweet, angsty, sad, angry, funny, beautiful. And I adore that last line!!! Yes, all love stories should end with a really cool car.
And the fact that Jimmy and Perry set them up? Priceless! I laughed so hard when Jimmy went into Perry's office after he flirted with Lois!
Beautiful job, ladies. I concur with all the rest -- you should write more together!
Bethy