I haven't been reading this story, Nan - sometimes I feel overwhelmed by everything to read - but I really liked this part a lot. The interaction between this Lois and this Clark was so very interesting. Imagine, Lois has no idea that Clark is Superman, neither her own Clark nor this one. But she manages to trust him and to explain things to him - I loved their talk about both Loises' attraction to Superman and to Lex. Clark really understood a few things about himself and Lois after his talk with other-Lois. Imagine that this Clark's Lois had actually gone ahead and married Lex. I loved that Clark figured this out:
"Anyhow, the point of all this is that if I can get *my* Lois out of this mess, I'm going to make some changes. For one thing, I'm going to be more honest with her."
Well, that's what I keep saying all the time - please be honest with her, Clark....
I loved this, too:
"Clark, you're the most honest guy I know!"
He pulled out into the heavy morning traffic. "In most ways," he said. "But there's one important thing I didn't tell her, and I should have.
I wonder if the "visiting Lois" will figure out that her Clark is Superman, too? Or will she go home to her own reality and go on being lied to by Clark?
Anyway, so scary... Luthor more or less own the Metropolis police force, or he certainly owns enough of it to be able to stay completely out of reach of the law. Surely Lois and Clark will nail Luthor, save the other Lois and clean up Metropolis?
Great story, Nan!
Ann
