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“No,” Becca whispered. “No! You can’t love her. You love me! Me!”
Ah, this is so like a child to think that there isn’t enough love for someone else, too.


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She pulled away from him, easily so, since he didn’t want to hurt her physically when he had already been so cruel to her otherwise.
I didn’t think he was cruel at all. I thought he broke the news very gently.


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*Just tell her that you will give up on Lois* a tiny voice in his head pleaded for mercy as he watched Becca.
No, don’t do that. As Ann said in a recent post, Becca is just going to have to accept it. I agree with what UltraWoman said:
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It wouldn't be fair for Clark to spend his life alone just to satisfy his daughter.
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“Scout’s honor!” Clark replied and held two fingers up into the air to emphasize his words.
Going on my many years of being a Girl Scout myself and later being an assistant leader and also having been involved with Boy Scouts, I can tell you that it’s three fingers.


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~~Even heroes have the right to dream.~~