Hey, great beginning. I like Jon's flashbacks. And I'm curious why he got shot.
Keep on writing and tell us more!
And you might use the blue arrow next time so that your story is easier to find...
Well, this is the first Fanfic I've written for anything. Turned out to be quite a lot longer than I thought it would be. Probably not all that good though
Don't think so.
I somethimes think that I wrote all crap and then someone says it's the best I've ever written. (That's either saying that my writing skills are awful, or that it wasn't crap after all. Well, I won't decide about that
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<No secret is worth a human life>, Dad had once said. Still, he couldn't help but feel a deep sense of guilt. <Mom, Dad - I'm sorry> was his last conscious thought before scenes from his life started rushing into his mind.
Perhaps you can write some statement concerning the time, that would make the reading a bit easier.
Come back with more!
