Ehh... I think I've commented on both places you've posted this, but I just think it's a really great story! Keep up the great work & PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE post again soon!
*Blayne*
Clark: You are really high maintenance, you know it?
Lois: But I'm worth it.
Clark: Not exactly what you had in mind, huh?
Lois: Let's see. So far I've been given a glimpse of ritual crop worship, been treated as your girlfriend, and insulted your parents. No, I couldn't have planned this.
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