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Thanks for your lovely comments, ladies!

Crystal, I loved you comic book-y way of putting this:

And I loved this:

Love your way of putting your comment, Chrystal!!

Maria, thanks for reading! Yes, Clark may be on his way, and I'm glad you liked Lois's way of putting the sheriff in her place. And that man at the end of the chapter must almost certainly have been Jonathan, because he definitely wasn't Sam Lane.

Mellie, I'm glad you spotted your own line in my story... but of course you would!

All Mellie!

Glad you sympathize with Lois's fears of telling the Kents that she has born them a grandchild.

As for why Clark has not arrived on the Earth... well, maybe he didn't receive the message at all. But it is also possible that he did get it, but it wasn't possible for him to leave for the Earth straight away.

Hmmm, yes, that's possible, isn't it?

Glad you enjoyed my total silliness regarding the steel bars of Clara's cell, and my only borderline PG quips about cherubs and the finer points of womanhood!

And yes, I too would have liked to see Lois drench the hapless sheriff is a drizzle of spittle!

As for how Jonathan could know that Clara is his granddaughter, maybe that was because... naah, I'm not telling yet!

And Lara:

Where's the little birdie Redbreast, eh? Chirp, chirp!

Aw, cut him some slack! Maybe he did behave a bit better than that.

And I love the fact that you loved my Jimmy loving the fact that Clara threw up on him! You know what I mean.

And yes, Clark may know that he has a daughter on the Earth, and yes, he may be on his way home, and yes, he may be dead or dying of Kryptonite poisoning - but let's hope the last two possibilities won't come true! (And I totally loved that emoticon sternly shaking his head at me!!!)

As for Lois really grabbing the sheriff by her ****, I think there are certain things you aren't allowed to write in the PG folder...

And Nancy, you are so right about this:

That's why Lois is going to have a cow when she hears about Rachel Harris locking Clara up for this (not to mention that Rachel Harris doesn't even know that Clara has done this).

And speaking about having a cow....

Glad you liked it, Nancy!

Chris, thanks for your emphatic NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

And you may right about this, or at least about some of this:

Sheila, glad you are reading!

Maybe someone told him? And maybe it wasn't Rachel?

Thanks, Lisa! You know, if this had been The Little Shop of Horrors, we may have made a mincemeat pie out of Rachel. But... naah, I don't think so. I usually like Rachel (and I don't mean on my dinner plate), and I almost like her even here!

Thanks for your lovely comments, everybody! You make me miss working on my story already!

Ann