Becca sat on the sofa in the living room and stared at the door, intensely. She mumbled incoherent words, which mostly consisted of ‘daddy’ and ‘come back’.
This part is so heart wrenching. Poor little sweetie!!!
I love how well you describe Becca's feelings of fear and hope for her dad to come back. It's just perfect!!
From Nancy's feedback:
Clark needs a nanny… Or a Lois… a particular Lois.
Yep, I second that. Clark needs a Lois. hehehe!
And BEcca does too, but she doesn't really know it yet.
