I love angst! As do many other readers of this forum (YOU KNOW WHO YOU ARE!!!)
Anyway, I have briefly skimmed your story to see what I thought before delving deeper into it. I've had pitifully few moments to read lately. RL being too crazy and also being held by threat of a beating by my muses. But I've been sneaking in a little reading here and there...
Wow!
That's all I can say.
Wow!
I can tell this is going to be a gut-clenching ride. I promise to give you more detailed feedback later, when I have time to give it a proper reading. I skimmed part 2 a little closer than part one and my heart was crying out for poor Clark (oh, and, of course, begging Lois not to leave him).
So, more fdk later, promise. (I'm in the middle of writing a story right now myself, so it may take me a little bit). But just had to say a little something for now - so you know that you have readers out here.
-- MR
