Thanks, Yvonne and Maria.
Yes, Maria this was a very emotional part. I just re-read it and cried yet again.
Lois was hiding and using mirrors to make sure no medical personnel were present.
Lois didn't know when she would be coming before she came, but Clark did, because Lois told him
after she came. (One of those time things, you know.)
Yes, Caitlyn saw Lois. Lois obviously decided not to tell Clark about that.
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Caitlyn lay awake and thought about these things. She wondered if he had understood that Lois knew well before her death that she was going to die.
Did Lois tell Clark she will be coming when he was dying?
What I was trying to say was that after Lois visited Clark and saw the interaction between him and Caitlyn, she realized that he would never have a relationship with another woman unless she (Lois) was dead. Therefore, Lois knew well before she died that she was going to die.
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This was not the first time she comes?
I don't want to give too much away....
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I'm glad you liked the part between Hannah and Jon.
I'm glad you liked the part where Clark tells Brook he will probably marry Caitlyn, too.
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When I re-read this, I saw many mistakes, which I will be fixing. Sorry about that. Blame it on the migraine I had.
