Hey, I'm content. I thought you would figure out my villain at once.
Well, yes, I changed the story a bit when Classicall complained it was too forseeable. And LaraMoon said another thing, that made me use a little idea I already had in my head.
I got nearly crazy by writing this idea in my story, always watching carefully that things didn't get too weird. My friend warned me to include this, but I hope I have managed without blowing my complete story. It would have been a shame.
