OOOOH! I'm so glad to see you posted this! Yay!!!
he’d lost his mind and maybe his heart and decided to act out the lyrics to a bad country song.
awwww... poor sweetie.

(although, I must object: there is no such thing as a bad country song! *lol*)
hehehe.

I really like that you're bringing all these things at this point in time.
with Wanda, he finally felt as though he’d found a person who could anchor him to earth, to humanity.
awww!!!

Love this!!
to pillow his head on the clouds and wrap himself in a blanket of stars.
Positively brilliant!
You realize, don’t you, that you’re not making any sense? I mean, really, none at all. You can’t change your whole identity by changing your hair and clothes!
you think? LOL!!!!
I am so loving this story!!

It's excellent!! I especially like that the whole "you lied to me about who you are" is turned upside down. I can't wait to see what comes next!
