Ah, thanks, LabRat. I thought I only needed the one feedback thread for the whole story, which I linked to in the TOC. Thanks for the clarification.
"You take turns, advise and protect one another, even heal or be healed when the going gets too tough. I know! That's not a game--that's friendship!" ~Shelly Mezzanoble,
Confessions of a Part-Time Sorceress: A Girl's Guide to the Dungeons & Dragons Game Darcy\'s Place
