Thanks for everyone's comments. I've been without internet access for the past two days, so I haven't been able to post the next part. I will post it in a few hours.
So, it seems, I have two for Caitlin (one being me) and two against (one being TOC who was so upset, she emailed me personally). I have considering rewriting this part, but I *like* Caitlin. After all, I created her. Let me know what you think!
Thanks again, Nancy
