Aw, this one was so sad!

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I tighten my grip, knowing full-well he could fly away, and rip it, if he wanted to.
This is such a great detail! There's a great kind of tension in here between her gripping it and him ripping it.

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How can you ever get the story if you’re not willing to get in on the action?
There's such a long lineage of reporters that believed this - she's right on the money here!

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And just like that the moment’s ruined.
“Stop what, Clark?” I can feel myself starting to get defensive, pulling away from him.
That's such a classic Lois response!

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You know, it’s just like when Trevino was threatening me.
That's a great comparison to pull!

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You cannot honestly think that I’d be safer without you.
Perfect little moment of realism to put in front of him here. Because he'd be saving her anyway.

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“I thought about it, and… there’s no one else I would rather spend the rest of my life with, but you.”
“You’re serious?” His face lights up with a smile brighter than a thousand suns.
Awwww!

Such a sweet ending!

Also, I hope you don't mind that I added comments here! I didn't see a FDK thread, so I thought you wouldn't mind them as a reply.


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